Room 7 Words Craft: The Best Game

Sunday, June 20, 2010

The Best Game

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7 comments:

Miss G said...: Awesome Saufoi, your writing has improved so much. I really like the way you explained how the ball went 'spiraling through the air'. Keep up the fantastic writing.

Miss G :-); June 21, 2010 3:56 AM
Room 2 at St. Pius X. said...: Saufoi, I saw you drawing one of those pictures, you are a very talanted young artist. This is a fantastic descriptive piece of writing. It sounds like you had fun playing and that comes across in your writing. Well done.

Miss Oldfield; June 21, 2010 4:52 PM
Miss Walker said...: Hi Saufoi, Fantastic writing. I loved the way you described the action. I especially liked the art work in the background and the way you spoke so clearly. Your movie was really interesting to watch.
And you WON the game.; June 23, 2010 11:52 PM
A'leina said...: good boy saufoi you are a good tiger sprinter Good luck next time

By A'leina; July 20, 2010 5:22 PM
waterlily said...: well well well u have shown people that u have improved well dove i really like ur writting keep up the good luck; July 20, 2010 5:25 PM
spxroom7 said...: fantastic descriptive writing Saufoi.You are a very talanted artist.Your writing has improved so much.

By Isitolo and $imone:]; July 22, 2010 6:58 PM
spxroom7 said...: fantastic descriptive writing Saufoi.You are a very talanted artist.Your writing has improved so much.

By Isitolo and $imone:]; July 22, 2010 6:58 PM

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