Kia Ora, Talofa lava, Malo e lelei, Bula Vinaka, Fakalofalahi atu and Welcome to 2021.
We are year 7 and 8, boys and girls of St. Pius X Catholic School. We are proud to share our learning and experiences with you. We welcome you to our blog and look forward for your supportive comments to help us continue to progress and achieve our learning goals.
Awesome Saufoi, your writing has improved so much. I really like the way you explained how the ball went 'spiraling through the air'. Keep up the fantastic writing.
Saufoi, I saw you drawing one of those pictures, you are a very talanted young artist. This is a fantastic descriptive piece of writing. It sounds like you had fun playing and that comes across in your writing. Well done.
Hi Saufoi, Fantastic writing. I loved the way you described the action. I especially liked the art work in the background and the way you spoke so clearly. Your movie was really interesting to watch. And you WON the game.
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Awesome Saufoi, your writing has improved so much. I really like the way you explained how the ball went 'spiraling through the air'. Keep up the fantastic writing.
Miss G :-)
Saufoi, I saw you drawing one of those pictures, you are a very talanted young artist. This is a fantastic descriptive piece of writing. It sounds like you had fun playing and that comes across in your writing. Well done.
Miss Oldfield
Hi Saufoi, Fantastic writing. I loved the way you described the action. I especially liked the art work in the background and the way you spoke so clearly. Your movie was really interesting to watch.
And you WON the game.
good boy saufoi you are a good tiger sprinter Good luck next time
By A'leina
well well well u have shown people that u have improved well dove i really like ur writting keep up the good luck
fantastic descriptive writing Saufoi.You are a very talanted artist.Your writing has improved so much.
By Isitolo and $imone:]
fantastic descriptive writing Saufoi.You are a very talanted artist.Your writing has improved so much.
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