Monday, June 21, 2010

The Best Game

video

7 comments:

Miss G said...

Awesome Saufoi, your writing has improved so much. I really like the way you explained how the ball went 'spiraling through the air'. Keep up the fantastic writing.

Miss G :-)

Room 2 at St. Pius X. said...

Saufoi, I saw you drawing one of those pictures, you are a very talanted young artist. This is a fantastic descriptive piece of writing. It sounds like you had fun playing and that comes across in your writing. Well done.

Miss Oldfield

Miss Walker said...

Hi Saufoi, Fantastic writing. I loved the way you described the action. I especially liked the art work in the background and the way you spoke so clearly. Your movie was really interesting to watch.
And you WON the game.

A'leina said...

good boy saufoi you are a good tiger sprinter Good luck next time


By A'leina

waterlily said...

well well well u have shown people that u have improved well dove i really like ur writting keep up the good luck

spxroom7 said...

fantastic descriptive writing Saufoi.You are a very talanted artist.Your writing has improved so much.

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spxroom7 said...

fantastic descriptive writing Saufoi.You are a very talanted artist.Your writing has improved so much.

By Isitolo and $imone:]