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Sunday, April 4, 2010

Room 7 Touch Tournament

Sweaty and hot Room 7 was at the field playing touch. Getting up to play was tiring enough for me, however it was a time to bond with others.
I felt weired and odd due to the fact that it was during our learning time. But we had so much fun. No reading, no writing or spelling. Hip, hip, hooray.

Yay, the game was just about to begin. The two referees blew the whistel and up went the ball in the air. I gasped for air before lunged to catch. Here I came. "Passed! Passed", the others called. Over to Francis, he ran, unfortunately the defense was so great. No gaps. He turned back, looked around and passed to Ayden.

The seven minutes went so quickly. Our time was nearly over. We were steaming hot. The referee's whistle blew and the game was over. We went out with frown faces. We lost. Despite loosing the game, we had a ball of a time. The funny part was that we had Mrs Tui (our teacher) on our side. She was good.

The next two teams went up to play. It was a tough game. They were so good. It was like watching the world cup. The referees had a hard time having to monitor the game.

When all 4 teams played we went back to the classroom and refreshed ourselves with cool nashi pears. What a great day we had.

by Justice

5 comments:

Melville Intermediate School said...

Justice
I really like your description of playing touch and I really like how you added in extra details and information about it after it had finished (like eating the pears!) it really made me think about the activity and how much you would have enjoyed it, so a great recount.
Mr Webb, Room 8, Melville Intermediate, Hamilton, Waikato

Anonymous said...

Justice, I really like the way you discribed how you and Rm7 played touch.

Well done
keep up the good facinating work!

Marga

Anonymous said...

Justice, I really like the way you discribed how you and Rm7 played touch.

Well done
keep up the good facinating work!

Marga

room 7 words craft said...

Great writing Justice.
We like the way you described what kind of feelings everyone had, it sounded like you had a lot of fun yourself.

Shaianne and Seini Siale

Anonymous said...

great justice that made me tired just reading it i really enjoyed reading your writng well done
by anna