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Friday, August 27, 2021

Imaginary Writing by Thomas

 

4 comments:

Anonymous said...

Hi Thomas,

This was good maybe check your writing and spelling and grammar.

Unknown said...

Kia ora, my name is Mr Ferguson and I am supporting Room 4 from Rutherford Junior High in Whanganui with their Cybersmart learning this year. I like that you have used bright coloured fonts on your Slides to make it clear and easy to read. Your task of pretending to have a conversation with your future grandchild reminded me of the conversations I used to have with my koro before he passed away. It would be awesome to see some blog posts about the awesome mahi that you are doing in your class this year! Ngā mihi

Addison RJHS said...

Kia Ora. My name is Addison from Rutherford junior high and I think this was a very good piece of writing talking about Covid-19 and why we should stay in school. I found that this price of writing was written last year as it is very different now on how we cope with Covid-19.

Nga Mihi

Anonymous said...

Kia Ora, my name is Cazna from Rutherford junior high in whanganui. I like how you told us the story about Covid-19, it had much detail but you could work on your grammar and putting a little more detail into the story.