Kia Ora, Talofa lava, Malo e lelei, Bula Vinaka, Fakalofalahi atu and Welcome to 2021.
We are year 7 and 8, boys and girls of St. Pius X Catholic School. We are proud to share our learning and experiences with you. We welcome you to our blog and look forward for your supportive comments to help us continue to progress and achieve our learning goals.
Great story. You read it clearly and made your voice sound interesting. I loved how you used the elipse at the end. I hope you are going to write part 2 . I feel sorry for the house and would like it to be happy!
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Well written, Tupua and especially well read. You showed excellent expression with a nice catch at the end.
Great story. You read it clearly and made your voice sound interesting. I loved how you used the elipse at the end. I hope you are going to write part 2 . I feel sorry for the house and would like it to be happy!
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