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8 comments:
Well done, very thought provoking.
Hi Brooke,
I agree with you about the fact that the shouldn't be in captivity. I do think the animals look like they're begging for freedom when I go to the zoo. Why do you think they are like an art gallery I would think it an movie.
From Thomas
Hello Brooke I really like how you have got a lot of really good reasons on why animals shouldn't be in Zoos. I like how you used puncation in your writing. Maybe next you could use a different font but any way keep up the great work!.
Hi Brooke
I agree with the fact that we should be in captivity. But I don't think that the animals should look like that there been for freedom when I goto the zoo an animal Looks at me. Have you though about a different way but any way keep up the good work.
Caleb.
Hi Brooke
I agree with the fact that we should be in captivity. But I don't think that the animals should look like that there been for freedom when I goto the zoo an animal Looks at me. Have you though about a different way but any way keep up the good work.
Caleb.
Hi I am Phillip I liked that you have whiten about the animals how they shouldn't be in zoo I think should be in the zoo what if they are sick.
Hi brooke
I really love all your facts brooke, It really reminds me of the Zoo, Next time Reread it xx but I really enjoyed it
Keep up the good work brook !!!
Lini
I like your fact that the shouldn't be in captivity.I to agree about the animals looking like they're begging for freedom when we went to the zoo as a school trip.
Keep up the good work,
Ewan
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