Friday, September 8, 2017

Brooke's Zoo Writing!

Animals in Zoo’s need to be freed they are born to live wild and how they want to. God put these animals on this earth to live freely not in captivity.



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8 comments:

Mrs Dines said...

Well done, very thought provoking.

Thomas said...

Hi Brooke,
I agree with you about the fact that the shouldn't be in captivity. I do think the animals look like they're begging for freedom when I go to the zoo. Why do you think they are like an art gallery I would think it an movie.
From Thomas

Austin said...

Hello Brooke I really like how you have got a lot of really good reasons on why animals shouldn't be in Zoos. I like how you used puncation in your writing. Maybe next you could use a different font but any way keep up the great work!.

Caleb said...

Hi Brooke
I agree with the fact that we should be in captivity. But I don't think that the animals should look like that there been for freedom when I goto the zoo an animal Looks at me. Have you though about a different way but any way keep up the good work.
Caleb.

Caleb said...

Hi Brooke
I agree with the fact that we should be in captivity. But I don't think that the animals should look like that there been for freedom when I goto the zoo an animal Looks at me. Have you though about a different way but any way keep up the good work.
Caleb.

Phillip said...

Hi I am Phillip I liked that you have whiten about the animals how they shouldn't be in zoo I think should be in the zoo what if they are sick.

Lini said...

Hi brooke

I really love all your facts brooke, It really reminds me of the Zoo, Next time Reread it xx but I really enjoyed it

Keep up the good work brook !!!


Lini

Ewan said...

I like your fact that the shouldn't be in captivity.I to agree about the animals looking like they're begging for freedom when we went to the zoo as a school trip.
Keep up the good work,
Ewan