Friday, June 23, 2017
Pio's Best Writing
Today at the count we had tennis for kiwisport with coach Campbell.
At the count coach campbell had a new machine for us to catch with one hand and two hands. It was really hard because the balls were flying at me so fast I couldn’t even see it flying at me.
Later on it was the girls turn to go onto the balls machine. I started to whine because The ball machine was cool.
Tennis Writing to Mr. Campbell
- Lusia
GOAL: To ensure that my writing clearly flows to guide the reader in relation to my purpose.
The Flying Ball
GOAL: To organise my writing into paragraphs in which the ideas are clearly related and linking these paragraphs.
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